Need reviews on what needs improvement. Do I need to keep projects or is it ok to remove that section? Does keeping one page resume help? Any other comments are most welcome. Thanks for helping in advance! #resumerwvi#resume #resumereview #jobs
Not even going to look at this toilet paper until it’s 1 sheet
Go back to your mom and please learn some manners
Says Master of Science at the top but there's no Education section? Or did it get truncated at the end of the second page? Way too much crap in there. Wireshark? Unix? Microsoft Office? SAP? What role are you really trying to get? Timelines don't make sense. How did you have an internship during your role at Company 2? Make everything smaller and tighter. One page. Put those notable projects under the companies where you did them. Make sure they're actually notable or strike them. Reduce the internships to one line each. Kill or greatly revamp the certifications section.
Thank you for your suggestions!
“Unprecedented efficiency and cost-effectiveness” screams “it’s an improvement but not measurable and doesn’t make a business difference”
Yeah 1 page should be the way to go. Some tips - 1. Put your professional skills experience on top as that is the most relevant thing, company and position in same line with dates to save space 2. Technical skills - You don’t need to mention each and everyone. When you say sql it’s considered on all platforms. No need to mention excel, PowerPoint etc that is expected as a data analyst 3. Why different section for notable projects, that should just go above under the companies you worked for 4. Certifications can go in one line with commas. Find a way to optimize space 5. Education can go on top or bottom in 1 or 2 lines 6. Also in your experience how one word is getting to next line and it’s occupying all space. Try to finish in 1 line, remove unnecessary words. Use ChatGPT to make it concise. I know we want to put out everything but that’s just too much info. Resume should be 1 page crisp and most relevant high impact projects/jobs you did. That’s just my opinion :)
Thank you for the input! Will work on it.
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TLDR. 4 YOE should never be over a page, wouldn’t surprise me if HM sees two pages and already binned
You're right