Hi, please roast my resume! I’m looking for a Director of Data Engineering in Fintech/Enterprises or SDM in FAANG. Please advise and thank you! #jobs #resume #resumereview #google
Director needs a 30 people team at least and being manager of manager. Resume doesn’t come across strong to me. Hire a professional on LI
I’ve managed mangers at my previous position. I didn’t upload that page apparently
Happy to recommend a fang director who did resume review for me in the past in DM. He also helps coach director and manager level candidates
Yes, please!
There's no Director level experience on your resume, at least not at a quick glance. There's also a lot of filler, condense it. As director or SDM, if one of your employees gave you a document with so much unnecessary text, would you read it? Or would you save it for later?
Thank you
Use Google xyz format for bullet points.
Thank you, I’ll use that!
You can’t write a whole paragraph. You’re being compared to hundreds of candidates in this market. You need to keep it 10x shorter.
Thank you, I understood that I need to make it shorter
dude 1 page... if im not reading all this u can be sure a recruiter isnt
Fit it into one page is a challenging, but I got your point Thank you
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Make it shorter, use bullet points, should be 1 to 2 pages max. You are not bill gates.
Got it, but should I give some context before bullet points?
No. Only Company (size+ other info if not a known one) and then bullet points. Choose action verbs to start your sentence. Choose wisely your words. Try to incorporate a diversity of vocab.